Scorch Sandracer RP - Looking for Work (Please Read!)

(RP) Dust swirled around the landing gears of the dented B-Wing as it touched down just outside a large settlement on Tatooine. I crouched in the shadows behind four large crates as a grumpy Weequay bounty hunter stepped past me towards the ramp. Mumbling something negative about his employer, he opened the ramp, then turned around and grabbed two small boxes to my left. I tried to remain still as he headed back toward the ramp, but my foot bumped the pile of crates in front of me, making a slight noise that was magnified by the boxes of illegal trade goods partially surrounding me. The Weequay was silhouetted against the bright light from outside the old starship, with one foot on the ramp. He paused and glanced back, then decided it was nothing and continued down the ramp. As his footsteps died away, I slipped out from behind the crates and crept out of the B-Wing, hoping to evade the bounty hunter and his comrades, who I hoped were still arguing in the cockpit. When I reached the first tent, I stopped to stretch my legs, which were sore from being crammed into the bounty hunters' ship for so long. Two Jawas walked past me, followed by an Eopie. My next stop was a cantina near the center of the settlement. I made my way past several moisture vaporators and a row of tents, then entered the bustling cantina. I found a seat two tables away from Keyera, who had arrived a short time before me. She glanced in my direction, then nodded her head toward the back of the room. A hooded figure stood alone, almost invisible in the shadows. If everything went as planned, my search for a well-paying job would be over. (RP Over)

Anybody who is reading this: In the comments, you can offer Scorch a job as the "hooded figure" in this RP. I will accept pretty much any mission from any employer (including RP clubs). :-)

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