my new bionicle story: Adventures of the scavengers sneak peak

I'm not quite finished with my other story but I will finish it soon and right after I do I will make a new story called…. The Adventures of the scavengers!

This new story is about two brothers who live on a deserted planet literally right outside the solar system of creation. (Their names are Granko and Swiftshift.) These two brothers never knew their families and try to make a good life on a harsh and hostile world. Many good things will happen to these brothers like them meeting Jake, Granko opening a weapon shop, and Swiftshift becoming a warrior. But in each day of their lives they face harsh weather, lizard-like phinixs, Night-dewelling Sektors, and Cardarix's evil plots.

I hope you like this story sneak peak. And please comment on any more ideas for this new storyline. :)